move quicker between things? at first anyhoe. drums a bit overpowering vs melody at first, but it improves, need some crispy on top? A bass lick not just kick? Dunno. Interesting ending. Liked it.
Hey thanks for the review i really apreciate the feedback. :) Dont know exactly what you mean by "move quicker between things" but i wanted the song to be alittle slow. I agree with you that the drums are abit loud at the beggining should of changed that :(. And i agree that the bass sucks was too busy with the piano and beats that i forgot to do anything about it. Anyways thanks once again for the review.
Nice melody, crisp up the arpeggios, tad more high end on the piano? Bit more bottom here and there, perhaps a bit of orchestral percussion? Makes my ears feel good. Like it.
Thanks for your positive feedback! I also appreciate the technical comments. I'll keep them in mind as I move forward. I wish I was talented with percussion. Maybe one day!
Not bad. Smooth out the guitar solo here and there, add more meat to background, need drums, bass. But good premise, like the ending/beginning picking, put more of that in there.
I agree. My main problem is I don't play drums or bass, lol.
Like it. But just a bit soft in the middle, bass overpowers it sometimes.
fair enough, thanks for the review! :D
Flute sounds fine to me. Perhaps vary the arpeggios a bit more. And I think it needs to move into something profound in the middle then back off- it sort of continues at a nice steady pace the whole way through- would be nice to hear a tad more variation.
It was deliberately made to be a droning ambient piece of music, though I can understand how it's a very acquired taste.
Thanks for the input.
Good Deal. Good guitar solo, a tad out of tune there...
I KNOW!!!! i regret not tuning. well thanks for listening.
Sounds great on the headphones, a bit overpowering on the bass on speakers but that could just be my setup. Moves well, keeps my interest. Always a tad different around the corner! I like the somewhat distorted part there in the middle. Good deal!
nice man i'll turn down the bass a little bit.
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